(AFOSMC:R) Subversiveness and Treason

Project information
(AFOSMC:R) Subversiveness and Treason is the first episode of Rem’s mapping series AFOSMC:R, or Alternative Future of the SMC: Revenge.

Review
Bad:

-Episode is 15 minutes long, which is impressive, but much too long.

-Sometimes, the textbox would switch talkers too quickly, so I wouldn't be able to read it.

-Remesia is WAY too overpowered in this episode.

-The argument between SM and Finn lasted too long as well, being over 1 minutes and 30 seconds.

-The song is the same, and it really doesn't fit the plot.

Neutral:

-Since it is the first episode, I will not judge the overall storyline as not much about it is introduced, other than the tensions between Rem, Cypher, and Enjania. Though, there was a smaller storyline within

the episode itself, so I will rate that.

Good:

-The animation and mapping style is awesome.

-Many characters speak in this episode, which brings a sense of variety.

-Mapper nations are repesented as their real ideologies, which I think is a nice touch to the series.

-The map is very well drawn, with multiple continents and islands.

-The length is overlong, though multiple episodes of about 4 or 5 minutes would make it more bearable.

-There are many text boxes, though they are a bit large, which makes the map smaller than it should be.

Quality - 3.5/5

Choice of Music - minus 2 points

Length - plus 0 points

Storyline - 4/5